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The Effects of Content and Audience Awareness Goals for Revision on the Persuasive Essays of Fifth- and Eighth-Grade Students

Midgette, Ekaterina; Haria, Priti; MacArthur, Charles (2008). Reading and Writing: An Interdisciplinary Journal, v21 n1-2 p131-151. Retrieved from: https://eric.ed.gov/?id=EJ785479

  • Randomized Controlled Trial
     examining 
    107
     Students
    , grade
    8

Reviewed: October 2019

At least one finding shows promising evidence of effectiveness
At least one statistically significant positive finding
Meets WWC standards without reservations
Audience outcomes—Indeterminate effect found for the domain
Outcome
measure
Comparison Period Sample Intervention
mean
Comparison
mean
Significant? Improvement
    index
Evidence
tier

Tone

Secondary Writing vs. General goal comparison condition

0 Days

Content and Audience Awareness Goal (intervention) v. General Goal (comparison);
68 students

1.23

1.24

No

--

Audience engagement

Secondary Writing vs. General goal comparison condition

0 Days

Content and Audience Awareness Goal (intervention) v. General Goal (comparison);
68 students

0.39

0.53

No

--
Genre elements outcomes—Statistically significant positive effect found for the domain
Outcome
measure
Comparison Period Sample Intervention
mean
Comparison
mean
Significant? Improvement
    index
Evidence
tier

Opposing reasons

Secondary Writing vs. General goal comparison condition

0 Days

Content and Audience Awareness Goal (intervention) v. General Goal (comparison);
68 students

1.55

0.15

Yes

 
 
50
 

Rebuttals

Secondary Writing vs. General goal comparison condition

0 Days

Content and Audience Awareness Goal (intervention) v. General Goal (comparison);
68 students

1.03

0.08

Yes

 
 
47
 

Elaboration of reasons

Secondary Writing vs. General goal comparison condition

0 Days

Content and Audience Awareness Goal (intervention) v. General Goal (comparison);
68 students

2.27

1.78

No

--

Reasons

Secondary Writing vs. General goal comparison condition

0 Days

Content and Audience Awareness Goal (intervention) v. General Goal (comparison);
68 students

3.60

3.10

No

--

Position

Secondary Writing vs. General goal comparison condition

0 Days

Content and Audience Awareness Goal (intervention) v. General Goal (comparison);
68 students

2.53

2.44

No

--
Organization outcomes—Statistically significant positive effect found for the domain
Outcome
measure
Comparison Period Sample Intervention
mean
Comparison
mean
Significant? Improvement
    index
Evidence
tier

Coherence

Secondary Writing vs. General goal comparison condition

0 Days

Content and Audience Awareness Goal (intervention) v. General Goal (comparison);
68 students

1.25

0.90

Yes

 
 
23
 
Overall writing quality outcomes—Statistically significant positive effect found for the domain
Outcome
measure
Comparison Period Sample Intervention
mean
Comparison
mean
Significant? Improvement
    index
Evidence
tier

Overall Persuasiveness

Secondary Writing vs. General goal comparison condition

0 Days

Content and Audience Awareness Goal (intervention) v. General Goal (comparison);
68 students

3.89

3.39

Yes

 
 
19
 


Evidence Tier rating based solely on this study. This intervention may achieve a higher tier when combined with the full body of evidence.

Characteristics of study sample as reported by study author.


  • Suburban, Urban
  • Race
    Asian
    5%
    Black
    45%
    White
    33%
  • Ethnicity
    Hispanic    
    17%
    Not Hispanic or Latino    
    83%

Setting

The study took place in one public elementary school and two public middle schools in an urban/suburban school district in the mid-Atlantic region of the United States.

Study sample

The analytic sample was composed of 60 boys and 47 girls. Forty-five percent were African American, 33 percent were Caucasian, 17 percent were Hispanic, and five percent were Asian. The report presents SES information at the school level; 29 percent of the students at the participating elementary school and 39 percent of the students at the two participating middle schools came from low income families as indicated by eligibility for the free or reduced price lunch programs. No students had disabilities or were English learners.

Intervention Group

From the previous MRG: The study was carried out in two sessions. The authors do not report the duration of each session or the amount of time between sessions. In the first session, all students were asked to write a persuasive essay on a prompt in intact classroom groups. In the second session, the students in the three conditions were physically separated into three rooms. In each condition, the students were asked to reread their essays and revise their papers according to their assigned group condition. Students in the general goal condition were given a general goal and guidelines for improving their essays (e.g. “make any changes that you think would improve the essay”). Students in the content goal condition were given a content goal and guidelines that instructed them to think of additional reasons to support their opinions and of examples and evidence to support their reasons. In addition to receiving a content-oriented goal and related guidelines, students in the content and audience awareness condition were given an audience awareness goal and guidelines that instructed them to think who might disagree with their opinion, what reasons those people might give, and how to defend their own opinion. Students in each condition were given specific guidelines to revise their essays.

Comparison Group

See above.

Support for implementation

The report does not discuss support for implementation.

Reviewed: June 2012

Meets WWC standards without reservations


Evidence Tier rating based solely on this study. This intervention may achieve a higher tier when combined with the full body of evidence.

Characteristics of study sample as reported by study author.


  • Female: 48%
    Male: 52%

  • Suburban, Urban
  • Race
    Asian
    4%
    Black
    30%
    White
    53%
  • Ethnicity
    Hispanic    
    13%
    Not Hispanic or Latino    
    87%
 

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